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this was mind blowingl awesome :3
i love the little bits of inner monologue you give Mello, especially his thoughts on animal activsts - that 'the bloody thing should be honored he bothers to wear it' is SUCH a Mello thing to say. made me LOL.
also, the theme that runs through this makes it better than random smut. it's actually like a very good character study of Mello, what with the little details you put in about how Matt exasperates him with his calmness.
then again,
Mello slips his tongue into Matt’s welcomingly moist mouth and moans as Matt runs his fingers through his hair, feeling the hacker’s lips twitch into a smile at the sound. Mello knows it’s because Matt wants them to be caught. Matt can be filthier than he is sometimes, and Mello would love to know where he got that adventurous streak from. He supposes he’ll never know now, so he moans a little louder as Matt slides his hand under his shirt and wraps around his waist, just so he can hear the small sounds the other makes, which he swears to God, if Matt wasn’t a grown man, he’d call them giggles.
ASDFGHJKL so much win. seriously, this is the point at which my mind exploded. PERFECT. that is a masterpiece in three sentences, and i loved loved loved it.
so thanks. you know. for writing this :D
-zorrie816
this was mind blowingl awesome :3
i love the little bits of inner monologue you give Mello, especially his thoughts on animal activsts - that 'the bloody thing should be honored he bothers to wear it' is SUCH a Mello thing to say. made me LOL.
also, the theme that runs through this makes it better than random smut. it's actually like a very good character study of Mello, what with the little details you put in about how Matt exasperates him with his calmness.
then again,
Mello slips his tongue into Matt’s welcomingly moist mouth and moans as Matt runs his fingers through his hair, feeling the hacker’s lips twitch into a smile at the sound. Mello knows it’s because Matt wants them to be caught. Matt can be filthier than he is sometimes, and Mello would love to know where he got that adventurous streak from. He supposes he’ll never know now, so he moans a little louder as Matt slides his hand under his shirt and wraps around his waist, just so he can hear the small sounds the other makes, which he swears to God, if Matt wasn’t a grown man, he’d call them giggles.
ASDFGHJKL so much win. seriously, this is the point at which my mind exploded. PERFECT. that is a masterpiece in three sentences, and i loved loved loved it.
so thanks. you know. for writing this :D
-zorrie816